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Developmental Editing

Get an editor to coach you through all the stages of the revision process. We work on structure, style, and plot/character development together. I assess your manuscript using story trackers, compile a short report giving you clear direction for the next steps, and then we set up consultations to work you through the revision process.

As I read through your manuscript, I will…

  • · Track your story development and look for ways to increase tension, pacing, and character development.
  • · Suggest improvements to the narrator and characters’ voices.
  • · Look for tropes and literary elements to incorporate that will heighten reader satisfaction.
  • · Suggest improvements to the prose (grammar, style, clarity) and formatting, as needed.
  • · Help you identify and reach the manuscript’s target audience.

 
Then we will review the suggested changes, either by email or through a 30-min. consultation call. You will make your revisions and send the manuscript back for a second manuscript assessment.

Starts at $0.03/word.

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How Can I Help You?

I've edited over 150 manuscripts so far, with several having gone on to be best sellers.
I'd like to help you with yours.

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