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Line Editing

This service focuses on the use of language to communicate the message and develop the narrative stylistically. Along with grammar correction, I suggest diction and syntax revisions to polish your prose.

I’ll read through your manuscript using Tracking Changes and…

  • · Revise prose to fix grammar and spelling mistakes.
  • · Suggest improvements to make the sentence meaning more clear and powerful.
  • · Suggest improvements to the story’s pacing, character and theme development.
  • · Find and suggest alternatives for plot holes.
  • · Create a style guide that tracks the spelling of characters, locations, and invented words.

 
This service includes two editing passes. When we’re done, we can review the suggested changes, either by email or through a 30-min. consultation call.

Starts at $0.02/word.

Line Editing Portfolio

Galaxy’s Edge: Takeover Part 1

Galaxy’s Edge: Takeover Part 1

Calida’s Forge

Calida’s Forge

Commando (RMS Commandos 1)

Commando (RMS Commandos 1)

Breach Team

Breach Team

A Gathering of Fools (Vensille Saga 1)

A Gathering of Fools (Vensille Saga 1)

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I've edited over 150 manuscripts so far, with several having gone on to be best sellers.
I'd like to help you with yours.

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